written by Melanie Naumann
One of the biggest aspects nowadays is that there’s so much noise.
Now, traditional songwriting advice says to start with the flow of ideas and gradually introduce the listener to the song's world.
However, this approach fails to captivate the audience's attention right from the start – resulting in people skipping the song.
That's why you need to shift away from the traditional method and start treating your song’s first line like a hook.
Your Song's First Line Needs To Be A Strong HOOK That Grabs Your Listener's Attention!
And the best way to catch your audience’s attention is to start your song with a problem.
Because that immediately grabs the listener's attention and draws them into the song.
Now, the concept behind this approach is really simple.
When you present a problem or conflict right at the beginning, you create intrigue, for example,
The secret with this technique is that you're always engaging the listener from the very first moment.
Because, as we said earlier, there’s so much noise.
So we gotta break through to them right with our song’s beginning.
The reason why this approach is better than the traditional method every single time is because it hooks the audience right from the start, leaving them eager to hear how the problem unfolds and resolves.
Additionally, it opens a narrative gap, making them wonder how that problem may get resolved.
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Melanie.
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