written by Melanie Naumann
A dilemma (the crisis or when your character is standing at the crossroads) is when the path they wanted to follow to reach their goal is not a one-way route anymore.
They now have to choose whether they will turn left or right.
They only have two possibilities and no matter what they choose, they’ll lose something in the process.
Either they face a Best Bad Choice in which neither option is acceptable or preferable.
Or they face an irreconcilable goods question of two choices that are either good for the character in the song but bad for someone else, or vice versa.
Your song's main character must get tested and put into a crossroad moment where they face a real choice with meaningful stakes.
The good thing is if you think about a crisis moment for the character in your song, you can build a story around that character whose inner strength will be tested by having to make this extreme choice.
Asking yourself where your character is stuck will help you get unstuck in your songwriting.
There is one sentence that will clarify what you want to write about, help you understand your character, and create a foundation that will guide you through your song and your listeners.
In this sentence, there are three fundamental elements that we need to include in the equation:
The template for this sentence is as follows:
A SOMEBODY / who must do SOMETHING they really don’t want to do / or else this other really bad SOMETHING will happen.
In "Eye of the Tiger" by Survivor the central dilemma (according to the template above) is the following:
A talented street fighter must become the eye of the tiger or he won’t survive, lose his dreams, or sell out to trade in his passion for glory.
In Eminem’s song "Sing for the Moment" the sentence is:
A rap artist must face the potential danger of words and songs that can lead to crimes or the hypocrisy of the government will destroy rap music that also does so much good to so many kids and people who have suffered a lot.
In "Nothing Else Matters" by Metallica the core of the song is:
A sophisticated protagonist who knows what he wants must open up and look at himself in another way or he will not be strong enough to ignore what others think or claim to know about him and his relationship.
In "I'd Do Anything for Love" by Meatloaf:
A sophisticated protagonist who must find out the darkest fear of the one he loves or he will lose her forever.
This central crisis is the very foundation behind the idea of the song that shows who the protagonist is, and what kind of conflict the force of antagonism is creating while the character has to deal with a problem.
In "I'm Not Okay" by My Chemical Romance the core of the song is:
A character who’s an outsider must tell the truth to his partner and ultimately about himself or his partner will never understand that they don’t have the life she thinks they have.
Why is that one sentence so powerful?
Okay, let’s use Eminem’s song "Sing for the Moment" as an example.
A rap artist must face the potential danger of words and songs that can lead to crimes or the hypocrisy of the government will destroy rap music that also does so much good to so many kids and people who have suffered a lot.
This sentence provides us with
That one sentence also shows the internal dilemma brought up by the external goal.
Internal Dilemma = He needs to decide if he wants to be selfish and choose his safety or does he want to serve others through his songs?
External Goal = Question the ones in power.
The sentence can inspire you to find out which incident has led to making your protagonist face his dilemma.
And you can also include the decision they are making, as well as how that decision turns out for them.
What are the consequences or what is the outcome of having made that particular decision?
In Eminem’s song "Sing For The Moment", the inciting event that must have led to him writing this song was the external pressure weighing on him.
That means it must have been that incident when they tried to question if he could raise his little girl. More complications were added on top, which led to a real-life crisis for Eminem.
So, the song is the decision of Eminem's real-life dilemma
He had decided to write Sing for the Moment and even release it as a single to make his statement to all the people who are trying to make an example of him.
And how did this decision turn out for him?
He has gained respect by not selling out and standing true to his values and his purpose as an artist.
This leads us straight back to why storytelling in songwriting is so important—this is exactly why.
Songs provide meaning and can impact people’s lives.
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