written by Melanie Naumann
In previous blog posts, we discussed the importance of addressing a specific problem so we can meet the listener where they are and make them feel understood.
We also discussed our song's main character's conscious goal/desire.
But of course, solving a problem by reaching what you want is never how it all turns out to be.
There are complications that make it even harder to reach one’s goal.
It’s like you walk to a concert and you stumble and fall.
That’s a complication, but you can still get back on your feet and continue.
But at one point in the story, something happens that throws the character off his set path to reach his goal and puts them at a crossroads.
It’s not only coming as a surprise to him, but it’s completely unexpected.
So after you get back on your feet and continue walking to the venue, you see that your favorite band is there and they take pictures with their fans.
But at the same time, you see how a grandma is knocked down by a robber and screams because she obviously needs help.
So what do you do now?
This unexpected moment is the most important ingredient you need for telling a story.
This is the one that decides if you have a story or if you don’t.
Stories are about what changes from the story's beginning to its end.
The one thing that makes that change possible is how the protagonist deals with unexpected events (that provoke change) that arise in their context (and that affect what they want or need).
This unexpected moment is the catalyst for making change happen.
It’s the one that puts the song's main character in a crossroad dilemma and they are faced with a this-or-that choice before they can continue.
That means, reaching their goal is no one-way path anymore.
They have to make a decision first.
Like what do you do:
Run to help grannie or get a photo with your favorite band?
The unexpected moment throws something into the character’s consideration that clearly shows no matter what path they choose, there’s no ideal option.
This moment of grannie being robbed and pushed changes the entire situation, and it throws the main character into a crisis.
There's no moving on unless there's a decision made first.
And no matter the choice, things have irrevocably changed. That's what happens between a song's beginning and its ending. It's that unexpected moment in between that brings about that change.
In our example, the crisis looks like this:
Option #1 (Grannie) means you miss the band, but you do something good for someone else. If the band sees this, they might come and help you.
Option #2 (Band) means you do something for yourself and Grannie doesn't get any help. If the band sees this, they might not want to have anything to do with you.
In both cases, there's no guarantee IF the band will see you. So all you can do is do what feels right for yourself.
And ultimately, that reveals character.
It's about what someone decides to do in those moments of pressure and how they act.
Just as we mentioned in the blog post about crafting compelling characters in your song lyrics.
So when it comes to showing that change between the song's beginning and the song's ending, then...
Stories dramatize change.
That change can be internal, external, or both.
External refers to their situation, physical state, and place in life.
Internal relates more to a state of mind where they learned an important life lesson. They may have improved their understanding of the world and their social status or even become a better person.
This is especially powerful in character-driven narrative arcs where the progression of your song's storyline happens through the transformation of the song's main character.
And again, that internal or external change happened because of hitting that unexpected turning point that threw the song's main character into a this-or-that crisis where they had to make a real choice with meaningful stakes on the line.
And through that external and/or internal change – which refers to the character's situation and inner values – the story delivers a meaningful message that helps the audience survive, thrive, or derive meaning for their lives.
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