written by Melanie Naumann
You know what makes a song truly remarkable?
It's not just about catchy tunes or fancy production.
Nope.
It's about the words—the lyrics—that have the potential to shake up the world around us.
Don't believe me?
Well, let me introduce you to two titans in the world of songwriting (Pat Pattison) and storytelling (Shawn Coyne).
They've got some wisdom to drop, and trust me, it's worth paying attention to.
First up, we have Pat Pattison, a professor at Berkley College of Music and a well-known songwriting mentor in the industry.
He boldly claims that a "perfectly developed song changes our way of looking at our lives and our surroundings."
Now, let that sink in for a moment.
Imagine your song not just entertaining your audience but altering their perspective on life itself.
That's some powerful stuff right there.
But wait, there's more.
Enter Shawn Coyne, the mastermind behind the Story Grid.
With over 35 years of experience as an editor, he knows a thing or two about captivating audiences.
According to Coyne, every effective story—and yes, that includes songs—communicates a controlling idea that speaks directly to the heart.
"Every effective story communicates a CONTROLLING IDEA in a way that bypasses the audience’s critical minds to touch their hearts and change their worldviews."
It's about bypassing the audience's critical minds and touching their souls in a way that leaves a lasting impact.
And what's the vehicle for delivering this message?
You guessed it: the lyrics (more precisely, the story you tell in your lyrics).
So, why am I telling you all this?
Simple.
As songwriters, it's easy to get caught up in the melody and forget about the power of our words.
But here's the truth bomb: your lyrics matter.
They have the potential to shape minds, provoke emotions, and yes, change the world.
Think about it.
Some of the greatest songs in history aren't just catchy tunes; they're anthems that have sparked revolutions, challenged societal norms, and comforted souls in times of need.
"It's not those who write the laws that have the greatest impact on society.
It's those who write the songs."
Blasise Pasca
From Bob Dylan's protest songs to Beyoncé's empowering anthems, the lyrics are what elevate these songs from mere entertainment to cultural phenomena.
Now, I'm not saying every song needs to be a political manifesto or a profound philosophical treatise.
But what I am saying is this: don't underestimate the impact of your words.
Whether you're writing about love, loss, or the simple joys of life, focusing on your lyric's content and its message (what you're trying to get across to the audience) should infuse your lyrics with meaning, intention, and authenticity.
So, the next time you sit down to write a song, ask yourself:
Remember, you have the power to change lives with your words.
So, go ahead, unleash your creativity, and let your lyrics be the catalyst for transformation.
Who knows? Your next song could be the one that inspires a generation.
Until next time, keep writing, keep dreaming, and keep changing the world—one lyric at a time.
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Thanks for reading,
Melanie.
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